We loved this take on editing. This is a fun article and worth the read. Plus one can learn about the author’s novel.
My editor screeched. Well, she screeched on paper.
She counted how many times I used the pronoun it in my manuscript. Eight billion uses! So the story read something like—it it it it it it. Serious lack of character arc.
Or more accurately, my work read—It rained on his face. He dropped it, picked it up, and slid it into its scabbard.
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Kelly and Nancy